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You wake up to the sound of your cell phone ringing. You sit up in your bed and look at the time. Its noon, you remember making breakfast for your sister and seeing her walk to school with a smile on her face, a smile that everyone loved. You slip out of bed and pick up your phone. "Hello?" "(F/N)! We have great news for you!" You sigh; it was your parents. Ever since you overheard them talking about your face being plain and unattractive, and them wanting to marry you off quickly so they wouldn't have to put up with you, you never felt the same around them. They had always favored and adored your younger sister who was beautiful and charming. With her glossy long black hair and dark brown eyes it was hard not to. You loved her regardless of her being the reason your parents looked down on you. It wasn't her fault your parents favored her over you. "What is it?" "We have set up a date for you an hour from now!" "A d-date?" you repeated. "Yes! Hurry and get dressed! His name is Takuo Takada; you will meet up with him at the café a few blocks from your apartment." You hesitate then say "Mother, Father, I do not want to go on this date." Your voice trembles, you are a very shy young woman and never have you stated what you wanted. "What? Are you seeing someone already?" "N-No, but-""No buts (F/N)-chan. You are to go on this date." Your mother said firmly. "I am twenty-three years old I think I should be able to make decisions on my own." You cover your mouth quickly. Never have you spoken in such a way towards anyone. "Listen you horrid girl. You will go on this date or you can find yourself another family." Your father snaps and hangs up. Tears slide down your face. Your parents will disown you if you don't cooperate, and they would take back Taki, your younger sister. You couldn't do that to her after she had come to you for a place to stay to get away from your parents. You sit on your bed and wipe the tears from your face. You look down at your silver bracelet and caress it gently. You have had this bracelet since middle school when someone left it on your windowsill. Your name was engraved on it and just a few days ago a necklace that matched was waiting for you when you got home from work. You wondered if the person would ever reveal themselves. "You've got to be out there…" you mumble to yourself. You looked at the clock; it was now 12:30. "Well, time to get ready."
Blah I didn't realize how long this was until I typed it up xP
Well as I promised here's the first chapter of my IzayaxReader. This one will take longer than my ShizuoxReader because Izaya's hard to write for :iconizayaplz: = :icontrollfaceplz:
Anyway hope you like and heres the ShizuoxReader if any of you wnat to read it: [link]
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:iconanimefangirlaki:
AnimefanGirlAki Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
I really like this so far
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:iconmeleena-chan:
Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks!
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:iconhaneneanwarali:
HaneneAnwarAli Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Um~ I have a question. Can you please make a Izaya x Reader x Shizuo Fan Fiction?
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:iconmeleena-chan:
Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Writer
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Forever-N Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOOOL Trollzaya :icontrollzayaplz:
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:iconmeleena-chan:
Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012  Student Writer
No kidding xD
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EviL-Ju-ju Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
Agreed. It also helps improve your writing so you can catch mistakes easily. And good job.
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:iconmeleena-chan:
Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks <3
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TeamShikaIno Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist
I love it, but might I suggest something? I think it would be easier to read if you seperated everything into paragraphs so they are easier to read. Like this:

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You wake up to the sound of your cell phone ringing. You sit up in your bed and look at the time. Its noon, you remember making breakfast for your sister and seeing her walk to school with a smile on her face, a smile that everyone loved. You slip out of bed and pick up your phone.

"Hello?" "(F/N)! We have great news for you!"

You sigh; it was your parents. Ever since you overheard them talking about your face being plain and unattractive, and them wanting to marry you off quickly so they wouldn't have to put up with you, you never felt the same around them. They had always favored and adored your younger sister who was beautiful and charming. With her glossy long black hair and dark brown eyes it was hard not to. You loved her regardless of her being the reason your parents looked down on you. It wasn't her fault your parents favored her over you.

"What is it?"

"We have set up a date for you an hour from now!"

"A d-date?" you repeated.

"Yes! Hurry and get dressed! His name is Takuo Takada; you will meet up with him at the café a few blocks from your apartment."

You hesitate then say "Mother, Father, I do not want to go on this date." Your voice trembles, you are a very shy young woman and never have you stated what you wanted.

"What? Are you seeing someone already?"

"N-No, but-"

"No buts (F/N)-chan. You are to go on this date." Your mother said firmly.

"I am twenty-three years old I think I should be able to make decisions on my own." You cover your mouth quickly. Never have you spoken in such a way towards anyone.

"Listen you horrid girl. You will go on this date or you can find yourself another family." Your father snaps and hangs up.

Tears slide down your face. Your parents will disown you if you don't cooperate, and they would take back Taki, your younger sister. You couldn't do that to her after she had come to you for a place to stay to get away from your parents.

You sit on your bed and wipe the tears from your face. You look down at your silver bracelet and caress it gently. You have had this bracelet since middle school when someone left it on your windowsill. Your name was engraved on it and just a few days ago a necklace that matched was waiting for you when you got home from work. You wondered if the person would ever reveal themselves.

"You've got to be out there…" you mumble to yourself. You looked at the clock; it was now 12:30. "Well, time to get ready."

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Sorry for the long comment and of course this is jut a suggestion ^^;
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:iconmeleena-chan:
Meleena-Chan Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Student Writer
No thank you I love suggestions! And sorry about that I'll make it into paragraphs from now on. :iconforgivemeplz: Thanks so much for taking the time to read <3 :iconiloveyouplz:
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